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MacKenzie ([personal profile] mackenzie) wrote in [personal profile] memnus 2005-04-26 09:07 pm (UTC)

Brian,
Read your paper. It's good. But. It takes you a really long time to lay down the foundations for the structure of the game and that makes it a difficult read because my brain starts wanting to know what the point is. If there's a way to incorporate individual points about the game into your analysis, do that. Otherwise, it's nice.
Love,
MacKenzie

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